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Save/Load, solves the fake tension manga carries with MC's - he could die and he always does unexpectedly. This is the reason I give this a 10. Despite other people's opinion, if the image is clear It's a 10 - especially when in full color. The shipping choice and the betrayal is forced. No past events has hinted this outcome. His interactions were all the same, so no character stood out. His goals are detached, he could drop the system and he states his desire too many times but he doesnt just live normally. His inner monolouges and diolouges are flat. I will praise ... when he goes through his dillemas on if he should end his team for more lives and if he should start off with the basics and get rid of the system. This is the second strength of the series. The author forces removing the system though, as MC was 1 shotting the strongest in the murim very quickly close to the end. The trascendent is also forced, a chapter earlier is the first time this guy was mentioned - a strength level of 99.9b is way too vital to just only mention in the final chapters. A great character progression moment is the 1st to admit he needs assistance killing the MC, his whole personality contrasts this action. Afterward, assisting the MC to warn him he's fighting the wrong battle - this refers to what I said about hinting a 99.9b boss in the end game. 10/10 due to the save load solution. What's next is unexpected as well.

No Antagonist Giving Character Tension. MC became intellgent through wars as a child Not regression, which is why I stuck with this unique character due unique backstory. After long, the conflicts were onesided and predictably the MC would win. Presumably, handicaps on genius MC's will happen, but it didn't - and later on I bet it will be. Either the men are all jealous of his skills or how he recieves women attention. The women either are obsessed with him(eq.approach for phone number) or a strong likeness toward him. All antagonistic women stopped after he heroically saves someone. The last thing this story needs is ... more allies. The art style improved without me knowing as the plot kept my attention. The characters all develop, for example many side characters admit their likeness and drop their untold investagations on him after he did something they like - and may admit they admire him. The feMC gives up fighting a political marriage but gains courage after seeing MC will guard her life. This is all well. The most improtant thing that can't be understated, is the lack of MC for the goal. I stuck with it, because the short term goal of bodyguarding to afford his sister a gift. This went nowhere, and I'm done not having a reason to root for him. I'm sure the antagonist that disappeared early in the story will emerge but he's not having current affects on the story. It's a fine story, just unfocused.

The character progression is developing very slowly. He states he wants to make it a goal to have his qi as strong as it was his prior life - yet doesn't make it a focus. Even after he states that a fodder requires his full stength. The story started with him saving a patient, and even failed at saving a cancer patient - so you'll think him focusing on saving patients supernatually would be the plot. At this point, he's doing ventures like pizzamaking, working at his parents cafe, movie acting. At this point, his main goal of returning to his prior qi is going ... to come together in the late chapters - where I'm not going to see. The author made it a point that the military was going to make him more capable in martial arts against weapons - yet the only change was Gas immunity. Too much screentime in the military was him overpowering others and him gaining favor by saving others mishaps. Again, not using screentime to improve his capability against weapons is against MC's goal. This would add meaningful tension which is missing. The MC's best trait is seeking how to become more likable, and we see the changes in character progression. I'm guessing "co-exisistence" is the theme now - we're 63 chapters in and he's not in conflict to where he needs anyone. The art is good—especially when it shows how he looks when he uses his demon hallucinations.

The father said he didn't want children and the inspector disregards his wants. The npcs are side eying the inspector and THe inpector doesn't regard that as an unsafe environment for a child. The inspector gets a face touch from the mother, in effect he sees them fit for caretaking. The MC disregards parents beliefs, and the unwelcomeness of the environment and overlaps them with what he wants. This is based off the first story event - as after that event I couldn't stand anymore. The concept is straightfoward on if a system is capable of who is fit and unfit for caretaking.

He takes no steps to find out about the world and his powers unless someone else holds his hand. He isn't curious at all, and without the powers he recieves he's uncreative to win a fight. He's asking his chat information instead of figuring it out himself. I do like a MC who isn't scared to punch a human though... and the art is good for the eyes. Those are my only pros.

It was very predictable, the antagonist is being tased to sleep - he's no threat. The characters aren't really soulful, the dynamic between the chef and the restaurant manager was the closest ... thing to a realistic dynamic. MC didn't even react emotionally telling the manager of his death - as well as when he found his parents are in military custody. Everything is robotic.

No Antagonist or Tension. It's a great runner up of Medical Return with the regressor uses its workplace knowledge in the next life, but what it misses is an antagonist and tension. He's being spoonfed, and introduces a romance option before he deals with one twist. His mom already doesn't have to work anymore, within the first chapter he signed a contract for millions. Medical Return atleast earned his first shares and millions through copying from what someone else did in the pastlife. This one earned his millions through having "star potential" without an actual movie to prove he's capable. The one who are ... impressed are not skeptical enough. You have the writer giving him a position which is opposite of his life - which is hating his mom, just to test him. He didn't know he was that person in his past life so it was easy for him. What kind of tension is that - the author couldnt find something actually difficult? Medical Return had the MC poisoned from the jump from the antagonist - he might've not been smarter but he made sure his punches hurt. I dont like this.

The main character is written inconsistently, he's analytical when he's a detective but with the woman who murdered him he's an idiot. Instead of looking at her as a quest to fufill so he has to pretend to like her to not get murdered - he falls for her. Simtameously, tounge kissing the milk addict then gets distant once he realizes he raised her interest in him too high. This is circling back to where he's analytical - but when it comes to the milk addict he distances - but the stupidity is falling for the one who murdered him every chapter. He enjoys being ... handcuffed, and gets depressed when she's not home before him. That is my main criticism. Many things could've been better, but it seems the author is writing anything now. The parallel bodies part didn't move anything foward. The regression 14 years earlier didn't move anything foward. I thought it was to fufill the quest for the murderer girl and the "bad future of the elder woman" high school girl simtameously. As he took care of the murderer until she met her grandfather - which I thought would change her behavior in the future. Here we are still haven't fufilled her quest yet though, so there was no point in her being there - additionally because she knew he changed her memories so she knew that wasnt what originally happen.

The art is good for the eyes, the characters are subpar - the story's lesson is cute but inconsistent. The main character continues to blush over all his targets - including his love interest even though he knows they're all evil. We are closing in on 100 chapters, this isn't character progression. How can you even sleep next to somoene who will kill you for saying "I dont love anyone?". The load/save trope is the only creative thing about this clownshow - so I give it a 3. For its unpredictability - which in this case isnt good at all at the expense of character and story progression I'll give it a 6. I'm only giving it an 8 because in comparison to the hundreds of mangas I've read this is god tier.

The greatest manga of all time, I don't care for where it's from. The antagonist from start to finish is a fantastic hitman - and the only series to kill the protagonist. Not once in the story do you believe the protagnist has plot armor or won't lose everything because of the antagonist. The art is the greatest I've ever seen, the sterotypical "wet behind the ears" romance is there - which I find the biggest flaw. He was married for decades yet in his next life cannot tell he's being flirted with by 4 different women. Nonetheless, it doesn't damper the storytelling - but ... it is a notable inconsistency. The antagonist does seem to progress from being untouchable to a brief fear of the MC to returning to being untouchable to not being a threat at all - though the tension is always there as antagonist is unreadable. The protagonist still having to study surgery after being an expert for 30 yrs in his last life is a major inconsistency as well - there are times he doesn't go to school because he "remembers from his last life" to having to sleep 1hr a night to study. He does deal with patient deaths all through the story so he isn't an OP surgeon - even though he should. Very informative and simple language throughout the whole story, the dialouge is never long unlike other medical mangas. It speaks through visuals when possible. He has a goal throughout, and even though it is shattered he finds a new one he is satisfied with. 10/10.

Either your men set someone out to kill you by giving information on your whereabouts or they steal from you to put coins in their pockets. There was questions throughout and problems to be solved that never where progressed to being completed. It is very drawn out when it comes to solving conflicts. The characters aren't interesting nor were given a backstory to relate to. He starts off OP, and isn't serious on training or assessing his talents. In sum: Doesn't progress To Solving Biggest Problems. Now for the pros, the art and the main concept of saving a continent. That is what engaged me ... for 3 hours to finish. This is one of the 5 out of 300 mangas I've read to hook me.