With what it was trying to do, I feel that the story needed to be longer. 5 chapters is way to little for an audience to get really attached to the characters and get really into the story.
But for what it did do, I enjoyed it.
There are somethings i didn't like. Most obvious one would be the crazy stalker story arch. So far the story was believable and felt like something that could actually happen. I even looked past the girl injuring herself cause she couldn't deal with her job as an Artist. But the stuff that happened in the plot with the stalker was just eh. I also don't like how the stalker character got treated by the story itself. She doesn't even seem like the type that would be like that.
Not a fan of them also having respectable jobs to then having to do construction.
I'm a fan of the art though. While the art isn't great or anything, It does have a personal feel to it that i like.
Overall a decent story worth a read.
